You Are My Star In This Black Night

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You Are My Star In This Black Night

Post by [key]Scarlet » Thu Mar 24, 2011 2:55 pm

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This is a simple video with a simple story. It just talks about a normal evening of two lovers. =3
I hope you like it.

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Re: You Are My Star In This Black Night

Post by Laerium » Thu Mar 24, 2011 4:26 pm

Hmm, even though I understand your concept, it was a bit boring because we were looking at only a night scene of the anime, which you slowed down when it was a slow scene already; I'm not sure that was a good choice. Plus it has a little too much lip flaps, something you might want to avoid in the future :3

Good job though, it's cute ^_^
Nyarr ~!

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Re: You Are My Star In This Black Night

Post by [key]Scarlet » Fri Mar 25, 2011 10:32 am

Sure, I will try to avoid this type of errors in my next video.
Thanks :D

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Re: You Are My Star In This Black Night

Post by Diegao » Sun Mar 27, 2011 2:42 pm

Simple but nice. Not very enjoyable at all, but this is normal for what you wanted to make. You have to do a more powerful video for show us your real ability. I know you can.

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