Artsy stuff

El Banana · Post by **El Banana** » Tue Oct 14, 2003 3:18 pm

In a slobbering fit of FFVII fanboy-ish-ness, triggered by watching that damn Advent Children trailer for the 38th time, i decided to doodle this little thing.

Any thoughts so far? Anything I should fix?

Oh, and be careful. I didn't bother to resize it.....

Veldrin · Post by **Veldrin** » Tue Oct 14, 2003 3:19 pm

Yeah. Thanks about that resizeing thing.

Anyway I dont post comments becuase I am a hard critic to please.

El Banana · Post by **El Banana** » Tue Oct 14, 2003 3:27 pm

Be brutal. I need feedback.

I hate it when I draw something, and am certain it looks great, but three days later I look at it again and find all sorts of problems.

Lyrs · Post by **Lyrs** » Tue Oct 14, 2003 3:33 pm

Bad:
a) Wings...over done. No matter how great they look, i'm kiinda sick of 'em.
b) His right arm. Is he tryign to grab is crotch? Or is he trying to puch down his erection?

c) Eyes. I like human figures to have human eyes.
d) Sepiroth, can't say i'm a fan of him.

Good:
a) Lots of things.

jonmartensen · Post by **jonmartensen** » Tue Oct 14, 2003 3:38 pm

Lyrs wrote:Bad:
a) Wings...over done. No matter how great they look, i'm kiinda sick of 'em.
b) His right arm. Is he tryign to grab is crotch? Or is he trying to puch down his erection?
c) Eyes. I like human figures to have human eyes.
d) Sepiroth, can't say i'm a fan of him.

Good:
a) Lots of things.

Moonlight Soldier · Post by **Moonlight Soldier** » Tue Oct 14, 2003 3:39 pm

Looks pretty cool El Banana, though I agree about the hand, his fingers look all warped or something...why not try subtlely inking the wings, make them more of a ...how should i put this....transparent i guess...effect ^^

Otherwise very cool ^^

El Banana · Post by **El Banana** » Tue Oct 14, 2003 3:42 pm

Lyrs wrote:Bad:
a) Wings...over done. No matter how great they look, i'm kiinda sick of 'em.
b) His right arm. Is he tryign to grab is crotch? Or is he trying to puch down his erection?
c) Eyes. I like human figures to have human eyes.
d) Sepiroth, can't say i'm a fan of him.

Good:
a) Lots of things.

a) I'm kinda sick of wings too, but I kinda like his scene in Kingdom Hearts.
b)

I've been wondering that myself.... would've deleted it sooner if I didn't like how the hand turned out...

c) Perhaps. I'll fiddle around with 'em.
d) Meh... me neither.

Unfortunately, this picture is the result of a very quick doodle in the back of a homework sheet for Japanese class.... no planning whatsoever.

El Banana · Post by **El Banana** » Tue Oct 14, 2003 3:46 pm

Lyrs wrote: b) His right arm. Is he tryign to grab is crotch? Or is he trying to puch down his erection?

Oh, and since I obviously drew myself into a corner here.... any ideas on what to do with his stupid right arm?

Lyrs · Post by **Lyrs** » Tue Oct 14, 2003 3:57 pm

Using paint to edit suxxors. I wish my scanner wasn't broken.

Anyway, try something alogn those lines or soemthing else. Heck, you're the artist. You figure it out.

El Banana · Post by **El Banana** » Tue Oct 14, 2003 4:07 pm

Although it does give me some ideas, what in the world is he holding?

I hope it's a knife....